Non-Corporal Entity Association First Cut with Feedback

Holding Shots Steady

- Hand held shots fit the style of the documentary

- Some shots are too shaky

- Only steady when it's meant to be

- Intentional shaky camera, some shots are shaky though

Framing of Shots

- Group shots framed very well, could have more individual focus through-out the house

- When shaky camera wasn't used, use of shots was decent

Appropriate Material for Task

- Clear conventions used for the style

- Smiling too much

Selecting Mise En Scene

- Clear use of props and setting to create an atmosphere

- Lighting and contrast needs to be adjusted

- Effective low-key lighting, but sometimes too low-key

- Lighting too dark

Editing for Meaning

- Could be developed by ensuring shots are structured to fit the tone

- Smiling/laughing

- Good use of contrast to create supernatural effect

Varied Shots Transitions and Post Production Effects

- After effects (night vision) needs to be added

- Censoring needs to be fixed as it doesn't cover the words, fast forward needs to be added

Use of Sounds

- Sound needs to be consistent across the piece

- Very loud, clipping, laughing

- Add in another voice over

- Effective music

- Censoring wasn't very good

Use of Titles

- Some unfinished, a clearer title sequence could be added

- No introduction voice over

- Good Channel 4 clip

Overall Comment

- Some high quality footage has been produced and a level 4 can be achieved with the addition of more work

- Could use more voice, and some shots can be sped up and shortened. But overall very good.